Dune ([info]dune_drd) wrote,
@ 2008-01-13 12:07:00
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Current mood: awake
Entry tags:drabble: dw

Drabble: Raillery
Title: Raillery
Characters: Jack/Martha, Ten
Spoilers: Last of the Time Lords
Rating: None
Word count: 100
Notes: Written for [info]tw_wotd_fic's prompt 'Raillery'. I'm not able to write longer or more coherent stuff at the moment (there's something larger similar to this lurking on my harddrive, but it refuses to come out), so a drabble it is. Unbetaed and nothing special. Concrit is love.
Fic Masterlist: Here.




It was Martha who broke their stalemate in the end, turned suddenly and hugged Jack fiercely.

Her arms (stronger than he would've thought considering her slender frame) nearly took his breath away, memories of suffocating warring with more positive emotions, making him dizzy. Martha let go when she noticed his uneasiness.

"Missed you," she smiled, kissing him chastely on the cheek.

"Martha Jones," he grinned, relishing her joy, "I'm not that easy. Buy me a drink first?"

"Oh, don't start," the Doctor's amused voice emerged from under the console and Jack suddenly understood that the Year of Hell was over.




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[info]uliamos
2008-01-13 11:19 am UTC (link)
Hmm, not sure whether this was your intention, but the Doctor's sentence just made me laugh (and I sure needed a laugh right now).

Nice one, by the way :)

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[info]dune_drd
2008-01-13 12:23 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. Glad I could lighten up your day a bit :)

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[info]unfeathered
2008-01-13 12:20 pm UTC (link)
Cute. Love Jack's "I'm not that easy" and the Doctor's standard response.

The last phrase (Jack suddenly understood that the Year of Hell was over) feels a bit out of nowhere, but I guess that's just the word limit problem. :-)

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[info]dune_drd
2008-01-13 12:22 pm UTC (link)
Jup, ran out of words ;) As I said, there's still a sequel to 'Going Under' lurking somewhere on my harddrive, but there it's the opposite problem: Too many words ;)

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[info]cherishthepast
2008-01-14 07:37 pm UTC (link)
I enjoyed this. Just what I needed on a rainy Monday afternoon!

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[info]dune_drd
2008-01-15 05:09 pm UTC (link)
Glad I could help :)

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[info]doylefan22
2008-01-14 07:51 pm UTC (link)
Jack? Sweetie? You really are that easy. :D

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[info]dune_drd
2008-01-15 05:10 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, and he knows it ^^

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[info]lowbatterie
2008-01-15 12:41 am UTC (link)
Just a drabble, but there can never be enough Jack/Martha ^^.

Never were there truer words spoken. :D It was great!

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[info]dune_drd
2008-01-15 05:10 pm UTC (link)
I'd love to write something longer, but I'm just babbling ^^ Thanks for commenting

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[info]mischief89
2008-01-15 03:51 am UTC (link)
You really can't have enough Mack! I loved it! :D

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[info]dune_drd
2008-01-15 05:10 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]oursoliloquies
2008-01-15 11:38 am UTC (link)
*grins* Love this.

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[info]dune_drd
2008-01-15 05:10 pm UTC (link)
Thanks :)

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