Dune ([info]dune_drd) wrote,
@ 2007-08-28 23:22:00
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Current mood: gloomy
Entry tags:fic, fic: tw

Fic: Left Unsaid (1/5)
Title: Left Unsaid
Summary: The stories Martha Jones never told the Torchwood team
Characters: Jack/Martha, Torchwood team
Spoilers: Set after Last of the Time Lords
Rating: None, just Owen swearing
Word count: 7 drabbles with 100 words each
Notes: This is [info]jadesfire2808's present for the Pass It Forward Meme, and it happens to be her birthday today as well... isn't that perfect? ;) Unbetaed, just written, sorry. It's really about the things I didn't write, and I planned to write something more cheerful, but I can't do happy or coherent at the moment. Hope it's still worth reading? *crawls back into her corner*
Fic Masterlist: Here.




"Doctor Jones, meet Mister Jones," Jack laughs, welcoming their newest team member to the Hub. "She saved the world," Jack adds, as if that's the best reason to hire her.

She seems fragile and shy on first glance, but her handshake is strong, her palm surprisingly calloused. Ianto can tell she's already cataloguing the Hub, trained, dark eyes flitting over everything.

Her deep friendship with Jack is glaringly obvious, yet Ianto read her file, knows they only met once while Jack was away.

He isn't sure if Martha Jones is a piece of Jack's puzzle, or a whole new enigma.


+++


"Tell her we're not the fucking Red Cross," Owen snaps, slamming the list of new medical supplies onto Jack's desk, interrupting Ianto's briefing.

"Just... humor her, Owen. Martha's seen a lot." Jack answers, his voice surprisingly calm, apparently he'd expected this confrontation. The doctor deliberately leaves the offending list behind when he's finished ranting, so Ianto picks it up to take a look, frowning at the vast amount of antibiotics they now own.

"Owen's right, we'll never need half of these," he states carefully.

"She's seen a lot," Jack repeats quietly, clearly lost in thought.

Ianto doesn't dare to ask.


+++


"Do you inhale your food? How do you do that?" Gwen laughs, gesturing at Martha's empty pizza box while she's still holding her first slice.

"You get used to it when you..." everybody looks up when Martha stops, her eyes suddenly glassy with memory. Jack's hand creeps into hers under the table, offering (almost) unseen support.

"Well," Martha begins again, "a pack of siblings does that to you, I guess," she smiles, stealing another slice of pizza from Jack. The moment is gone, the team returns to their usual banter.

Only Gwen's still watching Martha, her cop instinct tingling.


+++


Jack and Martha have a pattern, Ianto discovers soon.

Late at nights, when they’re the last ones left in the Hub, Jack leans against the doorframe of his office, a bottle of whiskey in his hand. It's an invitation to talk. The following conversations often last through the night, both apparently immune to sleep.

Ianto first thought they were shagging, but something in their troubled, weary stance convinced him that they're not.

Ianto finds them on the sofa late one night, Martha soundly asleep in Jack's arms, who's watching her intently.

"Nightmares," Jack whispers, as if he needs to apologize.


+++


"Dawai!" Martha yells at the smuggler, her perfect Russian surprising Tosh. It's the third time Martha spoke a language that isn't listed in her CV. She remembers the German and his alien gem and the memorable incident when Tosh had sworn in Japanese and Martha couldn't stop giggling, admiring her imagery. It's time for a little test.

"You're quite a language expert," Tosh comments in her best French while Jack's busy handling the swag.

"Helps to survive," Martha responds absentmindedly, not even noticing she slipped into another language.

Not for the first time Tosh wonders who Martha Jones really is.


+++


Martha gets out of her ruined, slimy clothes, unaware that she's almost naked and Owen is staring. She's sexy in underwear; lean, thankfully unharmed. He's not drooling, he hopes, but then his medical training suddenly kicks in.

"Where's that from?" he asks, fingertips travelling over a scar on her back. He yanks his hand away when he sees fear in Martha's unguarded eyes. She self-consciously covers the scar (fresh, deep, something very sharp) with a towel.

"Long story about psychopathic boyfriends," she smiles weakly and flees from the room.

Owen scowls. That wasn't the only scar she had.


+++


"There's so much out there," Martha says into the darkness, staring at the black sea of the Bay. Jack puts an arm around her, soothing her nerves, keeping her close. She knows he must feel her trembling. A constant, the Doctor called him, and she can't help being grateful that he's here with her.

"Sometimes I wonder if it's all worth it," she sighs, wiping a tear from her eye.

"We'll see," Jack smiles, his very presence warming her soul.

Martha nods, resting her head on his shoulder, waiting for the sun to rise from the sea. A new day.





Part Two



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[info]magicallaw
2007-08-28 09:45 pm UTC (link)
I am so looking forward to secretive, older, wiser Martha in Torchwoods, and you captured this brilliantly. These are all lovely.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:28 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]adafrog
2007-08-29 12:12 am UTC (link)
Great story. I adore the rest of the team not knowing Martha's story, but slowly finding out she's much more than she seems.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:29 pm UTC (link)
It's jack's storyline all over again, and don't we just love it? ^^

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[info]pairatime
2007-08-29 12:36 am UTC (link)
I can't wait to see how they act together in Torchwood and what the rest of the team does.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:29 pm UTC (link)
Is it 2008 yet? :)

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(no subject) - [info]pairatime, 2007-08-29 11:01 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]neadods
2007-08-29 12:50 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is fantastic - covering not only what she has learned to give her confidence, but all the trauma she's suffered as well.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:30 pm UTC (link)
And her transition to Torchwood gives us the perfect time to find out more about the trauma, I just can't see them deal with this on Who

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(no subject) - [info]neadods, 2007-08-29 07:54 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]skywardprodigal
2007-08-29 02:27 am UTC (link)
YUM!

So warm. And yet, so chilly.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:30 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]jadesfire2808
2007-08-29 06:09 am UTC (link)
Oh wow. This is awesome - I think I'd become so preoccupied with Jack's fall out from the year of hell, I'd forgotten about Martha.

This is just brilliant. Fantastic idea, really nicely done.

And for me! :D Thank you! *bounces*

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:31 pm UTC (link)
I could write these on and on, actually I had her travel route in my head already before I knew I was rambling... I'm terrible when it comes to longer, multi-chapter stories.

Glad you see you liked it and congrats on finishing that dissertation! :)

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[info]cedara
2007-08-29 06:54 am UTC (link)
Ooooh, this is good!

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:32 pm UTC (link)
thanks :)

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[info]lyore
2007-08-29 08:22 am UTC (link)
Loved this, especially the Jack/Martha understanding that runs thoughout.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:32 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]persiflage_1
2007-08-29 10:46 am UTC (link)
I like this - and very much hope to see something of this in Torchwood's S2...

PLEASE Rusty and Co ??

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:32 pm UTC (link)
I really hope we see her deal with what happened, too. Thanks for reading

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(no subject) - [info]persiflage_1, 2007-08-29 05:49 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]silverweave
2007-08-29 01:42 pm UTC (link)
I really, truly loved this story. I really liked Tosh's gentle probing and Ianto's tactful review of her supplies and Martha and Jack were bang on.

*adds to memories*

Why isn't it January yet?

*flails*

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:33 pm UTC (link)
thanks, it's always great to see that people enjoyed my scribblings :)

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[info]shara50
2007-08-29 01:56 pm UTC (link)
This was truely well done!

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:33 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]xwingace
2007-08-29 02:28 pm UTC (link)
Lovely.

Don't know what else to say. The one inelegant sentence I spotted in an earlier read has already been fixed. :-)

XWA

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 03:10 pm UTC (link)
I'd rephrased that bit already but posted an older draft *facepalms*

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[info]oltha_heri
2007-08-29 02:56 pm UTC (link)
I loved this. I love the idea of the relationship Martha and Jack will have at Torchwood with not only the year that never happened but the Doctor as well. I think this captured that really well.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:34 pm UTC (link)
thanks :)

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Martha the Enigma
[info]syreene
2007-08-29 03:08 pm UTC (link)
Well done! I can definitely imagine (and hope) the show going like this in the beginning...as they wonder and gradually figure out what Martha's all about.

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Re: Martha the Enigma
[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:34 pm UTC (link)
I can't see it really happening, they'll just stare at her like they used to do with Jack ;)

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Re: Martha the Enigma - [info]syreene, 2007-08-29 05:36 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]siranan
2007-08-29 03:35 pm UTC (link)
This is brilliant, and makes me lok forward to TW with her in.

Am meming

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:36 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]donutsweeper
2007-08-29 04:15 pm UTC (link)
He isn't sure if Martha Jones is a piece of Jack's puzzle, or a whole new enigma.
excellent, absolutely excellent!

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-29 05:37 pm UTC (link)
thanks :)

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[info]burntcopper
2007-08-29 09:34 pm UTC (link)
oh man. the awesomeness cannot be contained, really it cannot.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-30 10:41 am UTC (link)
I hope it doesn't infect other things with awesomeness until nothing else but awesomeness is left on Earth? ;)

Thanks for reading

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[info]marsgirl101
2007-08-29 10:02 pm UTC (link)
This was brilliant. I only hope they'll do something like this in Torchwood -I'm deathly afraid that they're going to gloss over the whole "year that never was" trauma issue for Jack and Martha.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-30 10:43 am UTC (link)
Torchwood would be the best place not to gloss it over. We got Jack/hand, I think we can expect at least some Martha!emo :)

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[info]cherryfeather
2007-08-29 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Oh, hooray. Love how well you painted this, very nicely done. (Languages made me giggle.) :)

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-30 10:43 am UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]notfromvenus
2007-08-30 05:45 am UTC (link)
Oh, I love it so much. I can't wait to see Martha on Torchwood, I hope that's how they write her.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-30 10:44 am UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]laurab1
2007-08-30 09:18 pm UTC (link)
Love it :) Fabulous, sounds just right.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-30 09:50 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]unfeathered
2007-08-30 09:56 pm UTC (link)
These are just – beautiful. I'd kind of forgotten that Martha coming to Torchwood would give both her and Jack someone to talk to, someone who remembered not only the Doctor but the year of hell.

Comments I jotted down as I read:

1. Ah! At last someone has commented on the fact that there are so many 'Joneses' in TW/DW these days! I love this look at Ianto assessing the new threat to his relationship with Jack.

2. The Two Doctors *grin*. I'm dying to see Martha take on Owen.

3. Gwen's turn - love "her cop instinct tingling".

4. Ohhh. Jack holding Martha through her nightmares. That just about broke me. (And Jack leaning against his doorframe in invitation nearly broke me in a different way!)

5. Martha's language skills – really hadn't given that any thought, but of course!

6. Owen and nearly-naked Martha! I like the way Owen stays (mostly) professional :-)

7. I love the play on words of Jack as a constant/being constant. And Martha joining him in his customary staring out at the sea sessions.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-08-31 09:56 am UTC (link)
1. RTD seems to be particulary lazy when it comes to inventing new names, isn't he? Sadly the Jack's comment that Ianto and Martha should marry (just for the convenience) didn't make it into this part ;)

2. Oh, there'll be fights of biblical proportions. At least I hope so.

3. Gwen talks to Jack, but not Martha. I guess she's just jealous ;)

4. Jack/Martha is canon. Period.

5. In my head she speaks at least 5 languages fluently ^^

6. Naked girls are the reason Owen became a doctor in the first place ;p

7. Wait till they start to stand on buildings together! ;)

Thanks for commenting :)

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(no subject) - [info]iko, 2007-08-31 12:31 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]iko
2007-08-31 12:30 pm UTC (link)
Wow. *friends you as to not miss more of this*
These drabbles are absolutely brilliant. (I tend to write in drabbles.)

I can't wait for Torchwood S2.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-09-02 09:21 pm UTC (link)
*friends you back*

Thanks for reading :)

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[info]purple_smurf
2007-09-02 08:35 am UTC (link)
I want Martha on Torchwood more than I want the next series of DW. This scares me. But the story was brilliant and I really, really, hope canon can live up to it.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-09-02 09:22 pm UTC (link)
At the moment I'm more interested in Jack's storyline anyway, so I'm really looking forward to all the Jack/Martha we'll get :)

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[info]trinity_tragedy
2007-09-02 11:51 am UTC (link)
Wow. Awesome! Simply awesome!


T.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-09-02 09:22 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for reading :)

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(no subject) - [info]trinity_tragedy, 2007-09-03 12:00 pm UTC (Expand)

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