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Entry tags:fic, fic: dw/tw

Fic: The Slow Path
Title: The Slow Path
Summary: Nine times Jack found the Doctor, but not what he hoped for
Rating: None
Spoilers: Vague ones for Torchwood season 1
Characters: Jack, the Doctor(s)
Words: 11 drabbles with exactly 100 words each. Do the maths.

Notes: I love canon, I love to work out the linear timelines of the stories. Just a quick exercise to see if I can still write. Doesn't mean it's interesting. It has a lot of large gaps, but canon didn't let me do it differently. Comments are love.
Fic Masterlist: Here.

No betaed, so feel free to nitpick. A virtual cookie and the crown of geekdom to the ones who can tell me the titles of all the stories I used.




It takes time to turn from Torchwood's lab rat into their trusted agent, but Jack can wait. By 1950 no one dares to ask why the leader's name of Torchwood Three hasn't changed in decades.

He does what he's paid for, searching for the Doctor. Jack could just wait for the inevitable refuel stop in Cardiff, but the unique time disturbance of the TARDIS should allow him to pinpoint its position. So Jack decides to take his chances, it's better than waiting.

It's a nice hobby for an immortal and he has nothing better planned for the next centuries anyway.


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One, London, 1963

The signal is constant now, resting for a long time. Now Jack watches a white-haired stranger as he rummages through this junkyard. When he hears words muttered in that language the TARDIS always refused to translate, he knows what to ask.

"Doctor?"

The stranger turns, alarmed. Not the right one, no spark of recognition. This is getting dangerous for the fabric of time.

"... Foreman?" tiny eyes are squinting at him, suspicious.

"A couple is fingering your police box, Sir." Jack says, trying not to smirk when the old man rushes off to defend his ship.

Some things never changed.



Seven, London, 1963

It's only been a few months, but Jack's back, out of pure curiosity this time.

He touches the casket gingerly, feeling a strange tingle in his fingertips. This thing is pure power. While still wondering what to do (the urge to hide it almost too strong to be his own), the undertaker interrupts his pondering, guiding another customer into the room.

"You” the small man makes him uncomfortable. Jack leaves without a word, but not without a proximity scan to be sure. Yet he'd spot that contempt in any body.

He doesn't dare to interfere. The Doctor will fix it.



Two, London, 1966

The store is ringing with chronotic energy, but Jack knows better than to be surprised. Travelling through time and selling antiquities is the most common temporal crime. But he won't interfere, just watch.

Time disturbances like this usually attract the Doctor, and when the TARDIS is unloaded from a lorry and placed inside he simply waits.
He purposely bumps into the two strangers sneaking around the store, getting the scannings he needs to be sure.

He sighs as the funny little man turns out to be the Doctor and the Scot simply gorgeous. Pity he can't do anything about it.



Three, UNIT HQ, 1972

He shouldn't have described himself as 'Torchwood spy' in UNIT HQ, Jack thinks, running towards the parking lot. A rather strange looking gentleman gets out of his way, his clothes practically screaming dandy. Jack turns.

"You're the Doctor?" he asks, because he has no time left to be subtle as he planned. The stranger nods.

"Gotta borrow your car Doc," Jack dodges an aikido kick, jumps into the yellow roadster and is through the main gates before alarms wail.

Relationships between UNIT and Torchwood will be frosty over his little stunt for decades, but that should keep this Doctor safe.



Four, Paris, 1979

The time disturbance is big enough to lure him as far as Paris, but whatever it is, it's too strong, making it impossible to track the TARDIS.

Strolling down the Champs-Élyseés, something catches his gaze in one of the windows and it's only when he touches the cool blue wood that he believes what he sees.

The TARDIS hums, recognizing, warning. Wrong time.

It's only when he's shoved out of the way by a stranger with hideously curly hair that he snaps out of his misery. He stares at the disappearing TARDIS, knowing that he made another trip in vain.



Eight, Cambridge, 1979

The signal has been bugging him for years, not like the TARDIS, yet so similar, so he takes a look on his way back. He certainly didn't expect a professor offering tea. The signal has disappeared when scans again, and he disappointedly sips the excellent tea before leaving.

He shuffles towards his car, bumping into one of the doctors by accident. A rather cute, lean one, his locks distracting Jack from his confused frown.
His gorgeous blonde companion quietly reminds him of some appointment, another mystery to solve first. Both go on without looking back.

Jack sighs. Another pointless trip.



Five, London Heathrow, 1982

Another time disturbance brings him to London and a quick use of his Torchwood ID gets him in charge of a Concorde after an impossible flight. The tingle of chronotic energy is breathtaking, as is the sight of the materializing TARDIS. His heart sinks when another stranger emerges.

He suppresses a grin as the Doctor - blonde this time - tries to explain to him and the impatient policemen that he's just in transit, and promptly proves it by dematerializing.

It's back to waiting then. Meanwhile Jack keeps himself busy by interviewing three lovely pilots. Sometimes he loves his job.



Nine, Cardiff, 1991

The readings are off the scale, coming from just across the Bay. Jack finds a battered and hurting TARDIS, her pilot in no better shape, staring blankly at the sea.

Jack's heart lurches; he knows this one, broken by war without the will to go on.

He cups the Doctor's face in his hands, steals another kiss. It's everything he can offer, willing this Doctor to survive, to hope again.

"Who else is there?" Jack asks, noticing the spark return to those ice blue eyes.

"Don't I know you?"

Jack smiles, disentangles himself and runs as fast as he can.



Six, 2003, London

Jack shakes his head, looking at the two divergent paths of history unfolding from the Tower of London. Powerful stuff.

A man dressed in hideously coloured clothes appears out of thin air, runs towards a collapsed man, stating that he can help, that he's a doctor (just not the one Jack hoped for).

Jack organizes a stretcher and listens intently. So the Doctor saved the timeline once more, good.

Jack leaves, before the eyes of the Doctor can meet his. The last thing he needs is a paradox in a weak spot in space-time. He won't come back to London.



Ten, Cardiff, 2007

"Thought I'd find you here," a lanky, pinstriped-suited Doctor grins as he opens the doors, not in the least surprised to have landed in the middle of the Hub.

It has taken so long, but Jack knows today's his lucky day. He grabs the severed hand, his beacon for the TARDIS and the only thing that kept him sane. The familiar hum of the time ship welcomes him, and the Doctor almost suffocates him with his hug.

"You're a very persistent man," the Doctor laughs, and Jack feels the weight of countless years lifted from his shoulders.

He's finally home.



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[info]wendymr
2007-05-06 07:07 pm UTC (link)
Awww. Loved this, especially the final one:

The familiar hum of the time ship welcomes him, and the Doctor almost suffocates him with his hug.

"You're a very persistent man," the Doctor laughs, and Jack feels the weight of countless years lifted from his shoulders.

He's finally home.


Yes. Perfect!

Though I do wonder how Nine didn't recognise him in TEC/TDD? Or did he somehow work out that the Jack Harkness he'd seen throughout his past lives was a future Jack?

Twisty timelines, indeed.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-06 07:12 pm UTC (link)
I still say Nine knew him already, that look he has in the Chula ship... anyway, PTSD has to suffice as answer to this one ^^

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[info]taffimai
2007-05-07 04:10 pm UTC (link)
Awwww. Love the homecoming one most especially. And the kiss with Nine.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:53 pm UTC (link)
thanks :)

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[info]jadesfire2808
2007-05-07 04:14 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I love these! I did an unbelievable amount of canon checking for my series, and these are just brilliant. Inspired, all of them, and I love the opening piece. I could only name a few of the episodes off the top of my head, so will leave the crown of geekdom to another.

Jack 'interviewing' the pilots made me giggle and the ending was just perfect. Great stuff! *loud applause* I hope it's proved to you that you can still write :)

Little nitpick: "he did another trip" - he made another trip

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:55 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for spotting the mistake, fixed it now :) I had planned doing something like this for Sarah Jane, but I suddenly realized Jack has far more time to do all this at the moment. Can't wait for the next part of 'your' universe, btw :)

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[info]tonko_ni
2007-05-07 04:21 pm UTC (link)
I absolutely adore multi-doctor fics, and any time Jack meets them. Brilliant. My favourite is Nine/Jack simply for old time's sake and the ouch factor for poor Nine there. Also Two, because Jamie really is a cutie.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:56 pm UTC (link)
Nine/Jack is canon!love. Whoohoo! ;)

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[info]laurab1
2007-05-07 04:29 pm UTC (link)
Awww. Love this :)

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:56 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]terrylj
2007-05-07 05:26 pm UTC (link)
"Remembrance of the Daleks" for Seven, "Timeflight" for Five, "An Unearthly Child" for One?

I like Jack interviewing the pilots, and the meeting with Nine.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:56 pm UTC (link)
All correct, very good :)

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[info]idle_myrmidon
2007-05-07 05:41 pm UTC (link)
Love it! Such an amazing display of Doctor Who knowledge... much to my shame I didn’t recognise all the situations.
A wonderful explanation for what Jack has been doing all these years.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:57 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]unfeathered
2007-05-07 06:56 pm UTC (link)
Well, I have no idea about any of the episodes, because my 'old' Dr Who viewing was patchy at best and mostly when the episodes originally aired (Doctors Four, Five and Six, anyway) - but I really enjoyed this. The idea of Jack searching all those years sounds just like what he'd do, and difficult to make it work with the Doctor not knowing (or not really knowing) him when they meet in the Blitz.

I like this too: "Travelling through time and selling antiquities is the most common temporal crime." A little reference to Billis?

Little typo: "The signal has disappeared when scans again" - missing 'he'. Sorry, guess that'll spoil your word count if you correct it :-)

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:57 pm UTC (link)
Ack, have to work something out there, thanks for telling me :)

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[info]threerings
2007-05-07 07:13 pm UTC (link)
This is lovely.

He grabs the severed hand, his beacon for the TARDIS and the only thing that kept him sane.

I really like this idea, that Jack's glimpses of the other Doctors are what has kept him going.

I also really like the Nine bit. Heartbreaking.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:58 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]sunstar77
2007-05-07 08:44 pm UTC (link)
These were great. Really nice, especially Four, Nine and Ten.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-26 03:51 pm UTC (link)
thank you :)

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[info]tabula_x_rasa
2007-05-07 08:48 pm UTC (link)
Jack/Jamie is so many kinds of win.

Loved your explanation/retcon for why Torchwood doesn't bother the Doctor while he's at UNIT. Oh Jack.

You worked in Shada! <333333333333333

And Jack finding Nine just about broke me. But the homecoming at the end helped make it better. ;)

I'd definitely say you still got it!

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:59 pm UTC (link)
thaaaanks :)

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[info]brella_owul
2007-05-07 09:36 pm UTC (link)
FAN-TASTIC these are great and I loved taking the DW journey with Jack. So great to read these and to have the perfect ending with Ten :-)

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 07:59 pm UTC (link)
good to see everyone seemed to like it :)

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[info]phoenix64
2007-05-07 10:10 pm UTC (link)
Aw damn. I'm afraid I can only have a passing appreciation for Doctors One through Eight, but the whole thing sort of broke my heart anyway.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 08:02 pm UTC (link)
aw, that's the best comment you could've made :)

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[info]ryttu3k
2007-05-08 02:24 am UTC (link)
I'm ashamed, I only recognised Time-Flight, Rememberance and Shada XD Oh! And City of Death. And... An Unearthly Child? So not so badly!

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 08:02 pm UTC (link)
All correct, not bad at all :) thanks for reading

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[info]ryttu3k
2007-05-08 02:25 am UTC (link)
I forgot to add - this is fantastic, and I loved it ^_^ Poor Jack!

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[info]larielromeniel
2007-05-08 05:42 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is wonderful! I know just enough canon to be dangerous, so...

One - "An Unearthly Child"

Seven - "Remembrance of the Daleks"

Five - "Timeflight"

But that's all I recognize. Oh, well. The fic is marvelous. I love a peek at past Doctors.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 08:03 pm UTC (link)
all correct, thanks for reading :)

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[info]mickeyk
2007-05-08 07:15 am UTC (link)
A comment above filled in the ones I didn't list:

1.) An Unearthly Child

7.) Remembrance of the Daleks

2.) ?

3.) ?

4.) Mona Lisa story, with the last of the Jaggaroth, Julian Glover, and "Space: 1999" alien Maya (Catherine Schell) guest starring and Tom Chadbon as Duggan

8.) ? audiobook I guess or the movie

5.) "Time Flight"

I couldn't think of what 2nd Doctor adventure it might have been... one of the Dalek ones? No idea about when the 3rd Doctor's car was stolen, or 6th Doctor helped someone who had collapsed. Didn't realize 8 had visited "Shada" too, and of course, "City of Death" is the title I was looking for, for the 4th Doctor drabble.

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 08:03 pm UTC (link)
You're good :)

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[info]mickeyk
2007-05-10 08:58 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. :) That's better than "You're a fount of useless knowledge". *grin*

Do I get a cookie too? *hopeful look*

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 10:11 pm UTC (link)
Of course you do *hands out cookies*

Thanks for reading :)

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[info]mickeyk
2007-05-11 12:00 am UTC (link)
Yay!!!!! *takes some cookies, and hands you a few for such a good fic*

Thanks for writing it. :) Here, enjoy the icon.

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[info]adafrog
2007-05-08 04:46 pm UTC (link)
awww......

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 08:03 pm UTC (link)
thank you...? :)

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[info]ionlylurkhere
2007-05-08 06:03 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yay. That was lovely. You do very good Jack. ;)

As for the stories, I think I've got all of them:

A: Unearthly Child
B: Remembrance
C: Evil?
D: I can't pin this down to a specific UNIT story, but somewhere after Silurians for Bessie being there.
E: City of Death
F: the BF Shada remake
G: Time Flight
H: Is this a pre-Rose thing you made up?
I: Jubilee
J: the last ep of Torchwood, whatever it was called.

(Lots of Dalek stories. Then again they are very time; I like the way it's possible to retcon almost all of it into the escalating hostilities.)

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 08:04 pm UTC (link)
Right, seems like you deserve that cookie :)

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[info]ionlylurkhere
2007-05-11 10:47 am UTC (link)
I'm totally using that as an excuse to buy cake at lunchtime ...

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[info]chicklet73
2007-05-08 09:30 pm UTC (link)
I really enjoyed this - it was fun and poignant and interesting to see each of the Doctors incarnations through Jack's eyes. Well done!

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[info]dune_drd
2007-05-10 08:04 pm UTC (link)
thank you so much :)

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[info]dreamiflame
2007-06-20 11:33 pm UTC (link)
Ah, this is great.

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